People cannot live without happiness, it
is important. I want all my family members and my friends to be happy. But I
want my family to be happy mostly.
Min Lee, Ashley Lee, and Chloe Lee-these
are my sisters. Min is the first one, Ashley is the second one, and Chloe is
the last one. Min lives in Seoul, Ashley and Chloe live in America like me. But
we are living in the different states so we usually can’t see each other.
When we were living together in Korea,
we fought a lot. Every day was like a war. I was pretty young at that time compared
to now. We became best friends as I grew up. My sister Min, she helped me to go
to America to study a lot, my second sister Ashley; she always listens to me,
and my youngest sister Chloe; she is a troublemaker but my darling.
My father is
pretty strict. So, I’m not close to my father also I didn't think he liked me. But
I’m really close to my mother. As I start to live in America, I realize that
how families are important to me and how much they love me.
Even though I’m not living with my family;
I love you guys so much. And I hope you guys have a happy day forever.
I don't have to tell you that sisters are the greatest!! Please work with me to correct your grammar. 13/20
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